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ieva Fashionista | For the first presentation it looks quite good... As for the armor mix and colors, I'm not really convinced: I like dark characters, too, but armor coloring doesn't really match the used weapons. Weapons themselves also seem a bit random. Furthermore - I think your screens, which partly tell a pictorial story, are quite ok (I also like the idea with invisibility), but you should choose some other settings under options (zoom, near, far etc.) And just like in normal photography think that many things look better, if you, (casually put), don't just clap them in the middle of the picture. And look for better character lighting (or rather make screens during the day). These are the reasons why I only awarded silver |
2019-05-29 8:39 | |
Gomo Wanderer | Hello there, ieva! Thank you kindly for the review, i'll try to work on the dyes and weapons in order to resolve the problems! Thank you for the suggestions as well, i'll make sure to implement those aspects within! ~ :) |
2019-05-30 1:13 in reply to ieva |